sleepy

Well I figured I would post something happy....and that is that things are slowly starting to look up...Bobby actually texted me to tell me he was making a change of venue....he hasnt done this in forever!!!! So Im not going to hold my breath...cause ya know I kinda like living.....but I think he's slowly becoming more considerate and affectionate...well the affectionate part is harder to describe so Ill save that for another blog. But here's hoping things keep going well! Night ya'll! PS Hi Dawn!!!!!!

My first semi-adult short story....

So for my "How to Write Fiction"class I had to write a short story only using action.....so here it is....right now I am pretty confident with it....though there is plenty of time for me to change my mind. I am going to share it and comments are welcome!

P.S. Hi Dawn! Miss you deary!

Caitlyn slowly opened the storm door and stepped out onto the deck. She looked out at the waves crashing into the white sand. The sun peaked out from behind a cloud and warmed her skin. She took a deep breath of the salty, sandy air and strolled out on to the beach, to the edge to the water. The water tickled Caitlyn’s toes sending a chill up her back. Taking another deep breath she ran into the water and dove in. Making even strokes with her arms, Caitlyn swam parallel to the shore, occasionally diving under to smooth her long brown hair out of her face. Her muscles began to tire and she headed back towards shore. As she walked out of the water, Caitlyn wrung out her hair and pulled her hair up into a messy bun. She walked across the hot smooth sand back to her house.

Once back at the house Caitlyn quickly showered and dressed, running late to meet her friends at their usual spot. She let her hair air dry and applied a small amount of makeup. She grabbed her cell phone and purse then hurried out the door.

Caitlyn and her friends gathered around their usual table, eyeing up their prospective male targets for the night. While Caitlyn sipped on her drink, she made eye contact with a tall, muscular, blue eyed, dark haired man. She smiled flirtatiously, and then quickly looked away and nudged her friend McKenna. “Is he headed over here?” she asked. “No, not yet.” whispered McKenna. Giggling, Caitlyn sipped on her drink again and sneaked a peek back over to the blued eyed man. She saw that he was still starring at her and she pulled her long hair over her left shoulder, exposing her slim, bare, tan back and giving a peek of her dolphins and hibiscus tramp stamp. Caitlyn nudged McKenna once more, “How about now?” she asked. “Nope, but I think he is interested,” McKenna replied. Caitlyn glanced over her shoulder just in time to see a short, plump red headed woman walk up to the blue eyed man and for the blue eyed man to wrap his arms around the woman and plant a sickening sweet, deep kiss on her lips. The red headed woman pulled away and beamed up at the blue eyed man, a shiny diamond gleaming on her left ring finger. She wrapped an arm around his waist and he wrapped an arm around her shoulder, they both headed towards the exit. Just before the blue eyed man walked out the door, he looked at Caitlyn with longing and then followed his fiancé. “Damn” muttered Caitlyn.

Both Caitlyn and McKenna struck out with the men they had been eye balling, while the rest of their friends walked out hanging all over the drunken men they had chosen for the night. “Hey, did you want to hit the diner before heading home?” asked McKenna. “Nahhhh, I am going to head home, I am beat!” replied Caitlyn.

Once she arrived home she headed straight to the beach, stopping momentarily to slip off her thinly strapped high heels. She placed the heels on her deck, and buried her feet into the now soft, warm sand. The waves were now gently lapping at the shore line, with the moonlight casting a soft light on the beach. Caitlyn slowly made her way to the water’s edge and starred out into the vast ocean. A gentle breeze blew causing her to shiver. Two strong arms wrapped around her waist from behind, “You might be warmer if you actually wore real clothes,” said the owner of the arms. Caitlyn turned around within the circle the arms created “I’d rather tease and tempt you Aden, then be warm,” she said warmly, looking up at the blue eyed man. He leaned in to kiss her. Caitlyn pulled away. “So that was her?” she asked. “Yes, that was Melinda,” replied Aden, as he stepped forward and pulled Caitlyn close again. He attempted to kiss her once more, Caitlyn pulled away again putting more space between her and Aden. “You’re engaged now?” she accused. “Yes,” Aden sighed starring out into the ocean. “I wish you would have warned me,” sniffed Caitlyn, tears welling up in her eyes. “I guess this is goodbye then,” she said softly as she kissed him on the cheek, and slowly walked away, shoulders slumped and tears streaming down her cheeks. Aden watched her walk away but did not chase after her. He followed the water’s edge back to where he parked his car and drove away.


So be as harsh or as gentle as you would like...I will take any criticism into consideration!

Boredom at its best....

So today was the second class for my "How to Write Fiction" class.....As long as I remember to take my medication before leaving the house I should be good to go. He reminds me a lot of the character Matthew Mchaunhey played in We Are Marshal (great movie by the way, if you haven't seen it yet, you need to). So our first writing assignment is to write 2 pages double space or one page single space of a story that includes only action. No obvious use of emotion/ feelings/thoughts. So it should be interesting. I am partially dreading my physics class though and am half tempted to drop it or consider auditing it out of fear of failing. But then again, if I end up doing well in this it could help raise my overall G.P.A which I wouldn't mind in the least bit. Today is my long day at school and I will not get home tonight until around 9pm......hopefully my professor will have mercy on us and will let us go home early but that is doubtful since its a one day a week class....which in the end equals lots of reading and home assignments....Yippee! So I guess I shall begin my homework....yuck...since I still have yet to finish or even start putting together my JPTARR project....whoops....( I wish I could just forget about it and graduate anyway)

I need to start paying more attention to the news...

Obama supporters...your man is already starting to waiver...whats up that?


Anyway, I have a creepy feeling that maybe I will reveal at a later date....I want to see how things play out with this new president....I have a mistrust for charismatic people who can talk well and fast without fully explaining what they truly mean...and thats what I feel is occurring with Obama....but thats not the creepy feeling.

Today

Was a pretty good first day back....though I did leave there with a massive headache....long story short its been way to long since Ive done physics and I cant remember the formulas or when to use the formulas...I am sure I will be able to pick it up though....or find a tutor. :-) I am hoping that Balto Co. Schools are closed tomorrow so I do not have to get out of bed in the morning I need to sleep in.

Well

Yesterday the dishes got done and that was about it lol. But that is ok.....its better than nothing! Todays goal is to have a great first day of school....and possibly get some laundry done when I get home from school :-)

Todays Goal....

Ok so I know its 3:30pm and I am just making my goal for today but my goal for today is to wash laundry and fold it and to type up 5 of my lesson plans from the last few weeks. SO I guess its off to take care of stuff....ttyl!